analyze the paragraph

The Advantages of the Internet

Internet has several advantages for the users. For the first advantage is the people have the connection with others people around the country or the world that can’t be met. It is because the internet can be connecting all of the people with another people in everywhere and anywhere. Such as, they can communicate with their family, friends, or colleagues in abroad by using social media. Like facebook, twitter, E-mail, messager, and etc. The second is the users able to find and catch the information, news, lesson material or new knowledge from many sources in the internet. For example, the students can browse and search their lesson to study or to do their assignment. And the next is to looking for the job vacancy that put in the internet by the company. The last advantage is the people can work by the internet. They may work from their home even their bedroom so they mustn’t go to office. They only work front of their computers or laptops. For instance, become a blogger, become a seller who sell the goods by online shop, or advertisement and so on. This business can earn much money and make the businessman get rich. In short, many benefits that can gain by people from the internet. They can be easier to communicate with people in around the world, can seeks for many information or the job vacancy and also work by the internet.

From the paragraph above we can analyze the topic sentence (topic & controlling idea), supporting sentence and concluding sentence.

1.      Topic sentence

Internet has several advantages for the users.

  Topic             controlling idea

2.      Supporting sentence

For the first advantage is the people have the connection with others people around the country or the world that can’t be met. (………………………………………..) until This business can earn much money and make the businessman get rich.

3.      Concluding sentence

In short, many benefits that can gain by people from the internet. They can be easier to communicate with people in around the world, can seeks for many information or the job vacancy and also work by the internet.

Okay, guy. That is about the analyze of the part of the paragraph. If any fault of my analyze. I take apologize and I really wish of your suggest or advance. Thanks a lot for reading ^_^